Great!
Wow, this was impressive! I love the comic book style you gave this, It kind of reminds me of a classic detective movie.
The backrounds were great, I especially liked the beginning hotel backround with the rain and puddles. It gave off a nice dramatic vibe.
The characters movements were hard to make I imagine, because all of it looked frame by frame. I give you much kudos for that, FBF is tough. But sometimes it looked a bit choppy...maybe you should of increased the FPS? That of course, would mean more work, but well worth it.
Another scene I thought was great was the SWAT officers running down the flights of stairs with their machine guns. I liked how they swung around the turns to go down the next set of stairs.
I really liked the story also, not too many flashes in the crime/police genre in newgrounds. Pretty original.
You've been working on this for a year? Wow. Your work is appreciated! I really enjoyed it!